Post by Irishman on Dec 7, 2011 15:56:15 GMT -5
OK, I wrote this to enhance a story I am writing with another W&W member. I created the character >Michaelys< several years ago, and have been actively writng a story about him with this other author.
I wonder if anyone can guess who the other author is? They are very creative, and I think you know them.
I pulled this out of the story we are writing so our friends can enjoy the song.
Please, be honest in your opinions. I need all the feedback I can get, lol.
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"There once was a lad from Nor’ Eire’,
Who left home an’ came ‘ere ta dwell.
He thought the jaunt was ta inspire,
And entered his own kinda Hell!
He gave up his fam’ly and kindred,
And traveled to lands far an’ wide.
T’was in the southlands he’d gotten recruited
He accepted and entered inside.
And lo after many long trials,
He found himself drafted and called.
An’ layin’ his hand ‘pon the Bible
Did promise ta protect one and all.
After list’nin’ ta speeches o’ royals,
And drinking his fair share of Ale.
He took on the form that’s most Loyal,
And proceeded to fight for the Dale.
He traveled the world far and near,
And many's the foe tha' t'was vanquished.
But in his heart he wished for the 'dear',
That would let the rage quiet and languish.
After many long years he escaped them,
And set himself back on towards home.
They pursued him and often they found him,
Yet he'd awaken and be all alone.
T'was in a far land he finally found her,
The woman to calm all his fears.
She's gentle and kind and he loves her,
And she's the one he loves ta call Dear.
At Shaunta's the binding did happen,
and the witnesses came for to call.
To see Bre'Cheye and Michaelys occasion,
That bound them together all in all."
~ by: JM Wood
aka Irishman
I wonder if anyone can guess who the other author is? They are very creative, and I think you know them.
I pulled this out of the story we are writing so our friends can enjoy the song.
Please, be honest in your opinions. I need all the feedback I can get, lol.
_________________________________________
"There once was a lad from Nor’ Eire’,
Who left home an’ came ‘ere ta dwell.
He thought the jaunt was ta inspire,
And entered his own kinda Hell!
He gave up his fam’ly and kindred,
And traveled to lands far an’ wide.
T’was in the southlands he’d gotten recruited
He accepted and entered inside.
And lo after many long trials,
He found himself drafted and called.
An’ layin’ his hand ‘pon the Bible
Did promise ta protect one and all.
After list’nin’ ta speeches o’ royals,
And drinking his fair share of Ale.
He took on the form that’s most Loyal,
And proceeded to fight for the Dale.
He traveled the world far and near,
And many's the foe tha' t'was vanquished.
But in his heart he wished for the 'dear',
That would let the rage quiet and languish.
After many long years he escaped them,
And set himself back on towards home.
They pursued him and often they found him,
Yet he'd awaken and be all alone.
T'was in a far land he finally found her,
The woman to calm all his fears.
She's gentle and kind and he loves her,
And she's the one he loves ta call Dear.
At Shaunta's the binding did happen,
and the witnesses came for to call.
To see Bre'Cheye and Michaelys occasion,
That bound them together all in all."
~ by: JM Wood
aka Irishman