Hody
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Post by Hody on Sept 21, 2007 15:26:58 GMT -5
"Wreckage"
I'm tearing, tearing and breaking down Lost at sea, adrift on my way to drown Cursed, to ever sail the blackened sea Alone, with no one here to save me
Damned, cast into the ocean of despair Cast aside, drifting towards hatreds lair Marked, forever with an unremovable stain Tossed, into a destiny of everlasting pain
My ship, never reaching the saving shore Blown astray, by winds that chill the core A wreckage, nothing more that will remain Barraged, assaulted by an everlasting rain
Smashed, waves breaking up another hole Stearing in vain, trying to remain in control Fading, sinking deeper into the endless dark Face to face, in battle with my own shark
Laid, finally to rest onto the deepest bottom Away, in a place where no one will ever come Closing my eyes, drifting to a place far away Tearing, sinking into the hell where I'll forever stay
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vynfyre
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Post by vynfyre on Sept 21, 2007 16:33:45 GMT -5
wow, where did you get the inspiration from for this poem? it is rather dark.
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Hody
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Post by Hody on Sept 21, 2007 17:19:18 GMT -5
hmmmm... nowhere really I guess, mostly just felt like writing somewthing new, most of my writing is rather dark... I guessed it was sparked by a song I was listening to and then I mostly just reflected a bit around life and this was the result
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vynfyre
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Post by vynfyre on Sept 22, 2007 13:35:50 GMT -5
hm nice, i usually write more of charismatic interest, or about girls. but i have been known to right a few dark ones..
EDIT: the poem i posted on here called "The Unholy Sacrifice" would be a good example of a dark poem i wrote/
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Hody
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Post by Hody on Sept 22, 2007 14:13:11 GMT -5
I like your poetry, when it comes from feelings it gets a lot better... the ones I'm mostly satisfied with of my owns are the dark ones that had a lot of emotion behind them... I'll read "The Unholy Sacrifice"
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