Hody
Paladin
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I came... I saw... I fumbled...
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Post by Hody on Jan 20, 2007 13:43:25 GMT -5
"Change"
Tell me now, how to change the way I see To redesign my inner thoughts, the way to be Time to grow, and enhance my broken visions Now a moment of truth, time for wise decisions
Tear down the walls, my own built enclosion Set free my soul, to find it's needed devotion A life in dissaray, now to set it's true course Find the path to take, a way without remorse
Throw down the blinding fold, remove the veil Turn towards the sun, warm the face so pale Clear my mind, banish the fog within my eyes No more doubt, no longer base my life on lies
Escape the shadows, and walk towards the light Confront the demons of doubt, and win the fight Renew my strenght, and awaken my sleeping wits Think things through, and then find a life that fits
Remember here now, and forever from this day The one great truth, that in your mind must stay Only one can change your life, you know it's true That one special person, the one and only you
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Post by isis63 on Jan 21, 2007 12:12:01 GMT -5
Ok, this one is definately my favorite of all you have written so far. Amazing!!!!
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Hody
Paladin
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I came... I saw... I fumbled...
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Post by Hody on Jan 21, 2007 14:40:17 GMT -5
thank you isis, I'm glad you like it
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Post by sirinnu on Jan 25, 2007 20:36:10 GMT -5
"Change" Escape the shadows, and walk towards the light Confront the demons of doubt, and win the fight Renew my strenght, and awaken my sleeping wits Think things through, and then find a life that fits I really liked it too, , , That part particularly, where positive attitude is shown, it's great....
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Hody
Paladin
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I came... I saw... I fumbled...
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Post by Hody on Jan 26, 2007 12:18:12 GMT -5
thank you my friend
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Unknown
Honored Warrior
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Post by Unknown on Jul 3, 2007 13:47:47 GMT -5
my favorite one too the others just made me sad
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