vynfyre
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Post by vynfyre on Jul 28, 2007 22:56:03 GMT -5
The Final leaf fell off the tree without autumn even starting The tree was old But the tree was wise it knew its death was coming The tree with all its might put all its knowledge and love, into that final leaf the leaf then floated into a wishing fountain the fountain was visited only once or twice a week but that young man who found the leaf found the spirit inside it the spirit gave him strength he fell in love he worked hard and became successful all thanks to a simple simple leaf.
The leaf comes in all shapes and sizes, it could be a person, place or thing. My leaf is the girl I wish was mine to hold... she gives me strength when I see her smile, and knowledge when I hear her voice, find your leaf and cherish it, it could be your dream come true.
-VynFyre
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Post by isis63 on Jul 30, 2007 19:15:06 GMT -5
Very nice as well, you are really talented.
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vynfyre
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Post by vynfyre on Jul 30, 2007 20:02:29 GMT -5
thanks! i appreciate all the compliments i recieved on my other poetry as well! thanks isis!
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Post by AC_Shadow on Aug 13, 2007 7:29:41 GMT -5
i really REALLY liked how you compared a girl to a leaf
very creative
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vynfyre
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Post by vynfyre on Aug 13, 2007 11:02:07 GMT -5
well they can both be lifeless and seem to lose their color later in their life
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Post by AC_Shadow on Aug 13, 2007 11:46:47 GMT -5
haha, why not make a poem about that? ;p
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