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Post by thedingo on Dec 2, 2006 19:01:06 GMT -5
BLOODLINES by Jonathan Whitten
Insipid repetition of wading through the fog a daily herding of the flock awakening the demons, they enter me again a willingness to place the blame a reason for the pain
Pinprick the door to freedom chemical clarity scraping together the courage to discard this leash Internal flood of darkness unable to find sleep awake and writhing through an unexpected agony
Born to defecate, upon the shallow grave Blinded followers, each one has earned my hate No regret will pass, your lives will go unsaved The bloodlines, wiped clean, death to this Human stain
Never inspired, uninterested in your plan always divergent from the path feeling disgusted, My heritage embarrassing I know that I can never graft when all I feel is wrath
A solitary hunter, attracted to the spoor of greed My one desire is to strike them down, then I'll feed snapping the final strand, disconnected from Man I Laugh maniacally, this whole foul race is damned
these are the lyrics to one of my newer songs I wrote. really not a fan of other people... not without a webpage between me and them!
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Post by P®ín¢e$$Mí$e®¥ on Dec 6, 2006 1:24:55 GMT -5
Wow, that's really fantastic. You did a wonderful job. I really could picture this as a song. You know how some people say they write lyrics...but it just doesn't seem song worthy...yeah...I think yours is great.
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Post by thedingo on Dec 16, 2006 6:45:19 GMT -5
thank you very much
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Post by isis63 on Dec 21, 2006 12:58:39 GMT -5
Sorry, I missed this one when you first posted. It is good, not my kind of music but still well writen and I can imagine it put to music, very nice. Thanks for sharing
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