Hody
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Post by Hody on Nov 23, 2006 15:59:30 GMT -5
”Running”
Running, screaming, heavy breathing, escape, be free, long away, run, if I may, followed, paranoid, behind me, they be, break the chain, away from this lane, tripping, falling, tears dripping, cry, beaten, defeated, on the back, in the sack, this can’t be, reality caught me…
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Post by isis63 on Nov 23, 2006 17:48:15 GMT -5
Nice................
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Hody
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Post by Hody on Nov 23, 2006 21:29:30 GMT -5
haha, kinda weird I know... and not my usual style lol
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Post by isis63 on Nov 26, 2006 7:57:06 GMT -5
No, it isn't like your others, but it's still nice. I like poems that make you think about what the writer is imagining when they write.
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Hody
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Post by Hody on Nov 26, 2006 9:51:05 GMT -5
I wanted something high beat when I wrote this one and I was kind of in a dark place... so.. well.. this is how it turned out then lol
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Post by isis63 on Nov 27, 2006 20:53:32 GMT -5
LOL, I know the feeling. My passion is painting, and it is amazing how my mood effects the colors i use. I have some land scapes that I painted a few years back that are all really, really dark and almost gloomy. Now when i look at them I realize how angry I was when I painted them..........
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Hody
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Post by Hody on Nov 28, 2006 10:59:55 GMT -5
yeah, emotion really does a lot to the work at hand
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Hody
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Post by Hody on Nov 28, 2006 11:00:50 GMT -5
btw, it would be nice to see your paintings one day :-)
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Post by sirinnu on Nov 28, 2006 11:27:02 GMT -5
true, true, true, me like painting too Nice short poem, hody. reality caugh me too arghhh...
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Post by isis63 on Nov 28, 2006 13:26:28 GMT -5
Perhaps I'll take some pictures and post them............ I suppose I owe you that much since you allowed me to bully you into posting your poems
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Hody
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Post by Hody on Nov 28, 2006 18:13:29 GMT -5
thanks sirinnu I'll be looking forward to them isis
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