Hody
Paladin
Clan Member
I came... I saw... I fumbled...
Posts: 2,115
|
Post by Hody on Nov 7, 2006 6:20:07 GMT -5
”The Broken Doll”
A broken doll, ripped and torn Thrown to the side, old and worn Laying on the street so cold In a pool of water, left to mold
Empty eyes, a stare so dead A twisted neck, a backwards head Lacings ripped open, stuffing inside Once a source of joy, and of pride
Why left here, in the cold street Unable to stand on its own feet Drenched and soaked in dirt Still in it’s baby pink skirt
Still a baby girl so young Now laying dead in the dung What a horrible end to a doll Which was once it’s parents all
|
|
|
Post by isis63 on Nov 7, 2006 21:24:49 GMT -5
I've read this a few times and can't explain how it makes me feel. It's haunting in a way, very nicely written but sad. I like it though. Keep them coming please.
|
|
Hody
Paladin
Clan Member
I came... I saw... I fumbled...
Posts: 2,115
|
Post by Hody on Nov 8, 2006 6:55:46 GMT -5
thank you isis, I know it's dark, glad you like it anyway :-)
I'll keep posting more... :-)
|
|
Magule
Sen
Clan Member
Wizards and Warriors Rocks!!!!!
Posts: 7,187
|
Post by Magule on Nov 16, 2006 16:59:45 GMT -5
dark is good in fact the darker the better i like it
|
|
Hody
Paladin
Clan Member
I came... I saw... I fumbled...
Posts: 2,115
|
Post by Hody on Nov 16, 2006 17:06:19 GMT -5
thanks magule
|
|
Magule
Sen
Clan Member
Wizards and Warriors Rocks!!!!!
Posts: 7,187
|
Post by Magule on Nov 16, 2006 17:07:48 GMT -5
absolutely
|
|