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Post by grizzly2 on Oct 29, 2006 18:21:46 GMT -5
noises could be heard from all about, as i sit here on this shelf. children laugh and play on this gloomy day. noises and shouts,then i was taken from that musty shelf. i was handed to a squeeling little girl, today is the day that changed my world. today was a good day at the fair, i am one happy teddy bear!
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Post by isis63 on Oct 29, 2006 19:52:34 GMT -5
Awwww, that is sweet. I LIKE IT, thank you. Don't forget we do run on-going poem contests so keep posting them and you might win a nice shiney new weapon.................
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Post by grizzly2 on Oct 29, 2006 20:02:36 GMT -5
thank you first one i ever wrote
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Post by icecreamman on Oct 29, 2006 20:32:19 GMT -5
Im a big fan of cute rhyming poems. not going to lie.
cool poem, neat idea especially for a first one.
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Post by Magule on Nov 16, 2006 17:00:51 GMT -5
not bad at all
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Post by Hody on Nov 18, 2006 6:43:11 GMT -5
I like it, it's sweet
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