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Post by jackthebear on Oct 16, 2006 21:22:50 GMT -5
Response to 2 Neil Young Quotes
A rhymed-up poem is where I've turned "what is the color when black is burned" It's twice the night in a cloudless sky The inside ooze of blackberry pie
"The night isn't black if you know that's green" and colors are myths we expect to believe Myths are the colors of life's in-between the king playing chess while he waits for his queen
Poems will end and poems begin poetry's princess is black once again the colors have turned on the huge maple tree to colors of Autumn and colors that bleed
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Post by isis63 on Oct 17, 2006 7:18:10 GMT -5
WOW!!!!! LOL, I'm speechless here, I love it. Great job, beautiful work.
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Post by icecreamman on Oct 17, 2006 7:52:32 GMT -5
its beautiful
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Post by Magule on Oct 17, 2006 10:57:57 GMT -5
good one
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