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dragon
Jul 30, 2006 19:39:49 GMT -5
Post by theanubisdragon on Jul 30, 2006 19:39:49 GMT -5
They have come to hunt me down to cast my body down to the ground but I am not afraid I just think back to batter day’s when my kind did fly on height and are song did fill the sky I remember when my kind did rule this land I can here there mystic call of times log past and day’s of old I can here them call come join us brother come join us now in day’s of glory on wigging on come fill the sky with are battle cry so they are here to hunt me down to cast my body to ground now my vision do’s begins to fad I think back to batter day’s when my kind did fly on height and are song did fill the sky and my kind did rule this land now my voices is lost and gone they have come to hunt me down to cast my body to the ground do not cry do not weap even though I am the last my kind now is all lost and gone and you where the last to here the dragons song
well that it not realy good but any way that do you think?
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dragon
Jul 30, 2006 22:06:26 GMT -5
Post by icecreamman on Jul 30, 2006 22:06:26 GMT -5
well i liked it. there were some great words/description and it flowed nice.
i got interrupted reading a few times and had trouble picking up my place though hehe
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dragon
Aug 5, 2006 11:29:58 GMT -5
Post by nomonkey on Aug 5, 2006 11:29:58 GMT -5
i liked how you ended this poem
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Magule
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dragon
Oct 16, 2006 7:06:24 GMT -5
Post by Magule on Oct 16, 2006 7:06:24 GMT -5
good
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dragon
Oct 16, 2006 20:03:37 GMT -5
Post by isis63 on Oct 16, 2006 20:03:37 GMT -5
It is great, I especially liked your descriptions / analogys of what a dragon's life was like. My pet dragon Charolette thanks you too
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dragon
Oct 20, 2006 18:09:35 GMT -5
Post by Morgothas on Oct 20, 2006 18:09:35 GMT -5
I like it...reminds of the days when I would read Anne McCaffrey
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