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Post by nomonkey on Jun 26, 2006 0:02:11 GMT -5
decent poem with a recognizable rhyming pattern. not a bad job, but it seems predictable at times, other than that thumbs up to you man, AND don't feel to bad, u got more caring friends here Also I'm planning on handing out some early prizes to my poetry contest. Keep an eye on your mailbox for the prize u will win.
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Magule
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Wizards and Warriors Rocks!!!!!
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Post by Magule on Oct 16, 2006 7:07:33 GMT -5
not bad
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Post by isis63 on Oct 16, 2006 19:58:54 GMT -5
I like it. I especialy like that you were able to focus the energy from a bad situation into something creative. Remember, what doesn't kill us makes us stronger and each situation we encounter makes us who we are. Hang in there, there are people who love you and who will accept you for who you are, sometimes it just takes time to find them.
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I came... I saw... I fumbled...
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Post by Hody on Nov 7, 2006 6:16:14 GMT -5
I like it in all is saddness, well written :-)
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