Ares7
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The Omniscient One
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Mar 27, 2006 2:19:35 GMT -5
Post by Ares7 on Mar 27, 2006 2:19:35 GMT -5
Never really gave it a title...
A tear of sorrow Drifting down a lonely cheek A forgotten lover Lays heartless in a bed of roses A destructive eye Under those tears of sorrow Woe to that oh sorrowful tear Leave thy lonely cheek Escape thee destructive eye Leave thy cheek, thy destructive eye To fall into a world of ruin Oh, tear… Of sorrow.
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Mar 27, 2006 9:21:31 GMT -5
Post by aznkrazypho on Mar 27, 2006 9:21:31 GMT -5
i like how u use the words over and over again
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Mar 27, 2006 17:31:42 GMT -5
Post by alanc303 on Mar 27, 2006 17:31:42 GMT -5
gotta get it a title
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Mar 27, 2006 17:56:39 GMT -5
Post by darkchampion96 on Mar 27, 2006 17:56:39 GMT -5
yup
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Mar 27, 2006 18:25:41 GMT -5
Post by alanc303 on Mar 27, 2006 18:25:41 GMT -5
TEARS OF SORROW! that should be the title
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Ares7
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The Omniscient One
Posts: 189
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poem...
Mar 27, 2006 20:41:06 GMT -5
Post by Ares7 on Mar 27, 2006 20:41:06 GMT -5
if anything it would be Tear of Sorrow
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asaria
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Cute and Crazy, what more could you want?
Posts: 41
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Mar 27, 2006 21:53:05 GMT -5
Post by asaria on Mar 27, 2006 21:53:05 GMT -5
argh! the thee's and thy's and woe's and oh's! Ahhhhhh!
Ok....rant done. (can you tell that I'm studying poetry in lit class, lol, I HATE discussing poetry-- makes no sense, I know)
ANYWHO....nice and dark. There's not much free verse that I like, it requires a bit of thought at first, but the more I read the poem, the more I liked it.
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Ares7
Clan Member
The Omniscient One
Posts: 189
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poem...
Mar 28, 2006 2:27:12 GMT -5
Post by Ares7 on Mar 28, 2006 2:27:12 GMT -5
I like shorter.. Simpler poems. I just went through a poetry class as well heh... Wouldn't pay attention to writing different styles Just let it out... Is how I write
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Mar 29, 2006 22:28:24 GMT -5
Post by Srfred on Mar 29, 2006 22:28:24 GMT -5
i like it
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Mar 31, 2006 21:27:58 GMT -5
Post by alanc303 on Mar 31, 2006 21:27:58 GMT -5
yeah...long poems make my head hurt
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